what i'm feeling
is not regret.
what i'm choosing
is for the best.
i can't stand
to lie to your face.
i won't be
in another place.
but i gotta tell you.
the honest truth.
now.
i never loved you.
i might have liked you.
i never wanted to be this girl.
i never wanted to see you hurt.
but i saw your face.
falling down
falling down
you guys, this is just something that i wrote about an actual event in my life. i know it sucks and stuff, but i wanna see what you guys think...
ReplyDeleteInteresting. It seems like you can relate well to the viewpoint of a bystander. Did the Mark Brown speech inspire you to write this. Thanks!
ReplyDeleteactually i wrote this out of something that has happened to me recently. my ispiration was my own.
ReplyDeleteA lot of people could relate to this, and I can in some ways. It's honest and to-the-point, and I like that, even if I wouldn't have wrote it that way.
ReplyDeleteit was good. :)
SOunds kinda similar to something that happened to me recently, although I was on the recieving end. I feel as though I should tell what happened, but why divert attention from your piece with my experiances? THis was well made, but there are a few things I would work on (mostly the grouping and periods).
ReplyDeleteHey little sissy! I found you! Eesh I wish I could have read this before now...but i'll comment anyway. This is very good, you should write more...I would love to read them.
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